last breath post 6

5 comments
-this story was a bout a biker
-she wants to win the race but she is really tired and hot but she does not want to stop because tof the money
-she crashes and she loses consiousness and her temperature starts rising rapidly.
-she vomits repeatedly and has a heatsroke
-when she is finally found the deputy searches for a pulse

4 questions
-wasn't there any cameras watching the race?
-where in the country were they?
-did she live?
-if she did what disabilities might she have?

3 vocabulary words
hemorrhage-a profuse discharge of blood, as from a ruptured blood vessel; bleeding.
sheathing-to enclose in or as if in a casing or covering
vomitus-the act of vomiting

2 literary words
simile- she was as hot as the sun
personification- the sun burned her

1overview sentence
A woman suffers a heatstroke while bike racing down the Appalachian Mountains